Describe a person who encouraged and helped you to achieve a goal
You should say:
Who this person is;
How long you have known this person;
What he/she did;
And explain how he/she encouraged and helped you.
Off the top of my head, the first person who has helped me achieve a goal is my co-worker Lisa214. I know her because of a part-time job I had during last summer vacation, where my job responsibility was mainly selling portable power banks215. Lisa was our team leader and I really liked working with her.
Anyway, the first day on the job was a real chore216. I still remember our boss asked us to reach the sales target217 on time. However, after I worked for a whole morning, I felt like I was out of my depth218 because there were barely219 any customers in the store. When I was worried sick about220 failing to meet the target, Lisa came up to221 me and encouraged me to not give up. She suggested that I go out and find deals instead of just waiting in the shop, and she even kindly took the time to teach me some sales tricks222 when I attended to223 my first customer.
Thanks to Lisa, I managed to achieve the goal that day. At the end of the day, Lisa had a conversation with me. She told me about the difficulties of becoming a salesperson, and encouraged me to keep at it224 no matter how hard it seemed. She saw that I was dedicated225 and passionate about sales and wanted to help me as best she could226. I was very grateful to Lisa for helping me step up my game227 when it came to sales. I honestly couldn’t have survived my first day without her.
215 portable power banks:便携式充电宝；注意内容根据个人喜好选择调整
216 a real chore:很混乱，很杂乱的，让人伤透脑筋的
217 reach the sales target：完成销售目标
218 out of my depth：非我能力所及
220 worried sick about:对…非常担心
221 came up to：走过来
222 sales tricks：销售技巧
223 attended to：处理
224 keep at it：坚持下去
225 dedicated ：专注，用心
226 as best she could:尽她所能
227 step up my game ：在能力上得到了提升