1 雅思写作医疗类观点论据:投资医疗的好处
1.1 促进经济发展
A投资医疗,B提高人们的健康,工作表现,C经济发展
背景:政府投资的医院和诊所提供公众免费的体检,让人们定期检查。
解释(A-B )如果他们得病了,可以立刻接受治疗。他们可以遵循医生的指示,过上健康的生活,减轻生病的风险
解释(B-C )公共费用会减少药物和手术的价格,所以人们可以接受医疗照顾,当他们生病和康复的时候。 这样他们能够保持健康和多产。一个健康的劳动力是经济稳定发展的必要。
- medical services 医疗服务
- improve their health and their work performance 提高健康和工作表现
- be beneficial to the economy 对经济有好处
- government-funded hospitals and clinics 政府资助的医 院和诊所
- free physical examination 免费的体检
- receive treatment 接受治疗
- be diagnoesed with some conditions 被诊断出各种问题
- follow the instructions遵循医瞩
- live a healthy life过一个健 康的生活
- reduce the risk of illness 减轻疾病的危害
- public expenditure 公众花费
- reduce the price of the medicines and surgeries 减少药物和治疗的价格
- receive medical attention 接受治疗
- fall ill 生病
- recover from ilness 康复
- remain healthy and productive 仍然健康和高产
- a healthy workforce 一个健康的劳动力
- sustain economic growth维持经济增长
Spending public money in medical services can help people improve their health and their work performance, which is beneficial to the economy. Government-funded hospitals and clinics can provide the public with free physical examination, allowing people to check their health regularly. They can receive treatment as soon as possible if they are diagnosed with some conditions. They can also follow the instructions of doctors to live a healthy life, which can reduce the risk of illness. Public expenditure will also reduce the price of medicines and surgeries, so people can receive medical attention whenever they fall ill and recover from illness. In this case, they can remain healthy and productive. A healthy workforce is essential to sustained economic growth.
1.2 提高生活标准
A投资医疗,B提高人们的健康水平,C让人们生活的更加幸福
背景:如果人们生病了,他们觉得不舒服,没有心情做任何事情。一个健康的身体是过上有意义的生活的 前提。
解释(B-C )他们可以尽可能努力地获得目标,去远方的小岛度假,打球,这些都是需要体力的。所有的这 些选择都让他们有满足感
- enhance people’s health level 提高人们的健康水平
- make them happy 让他们开心
- suffer from illness深受疾病的痛苦
- feel uncomfortable感到不舒服
- living a meaning life过上有意义的生活
- achieve ambitions 实现自己的梦想
- take a vacation 度假
- play some sports 玩体育 physically
- demanding 有体力需求的
- give a sense of satisfaction 有满足感
Another benefit of putting more money in medical care is that it can enhance people’s health level and make them happy. If people suffer from illness, they will feel uncomfortable and do not have mood to do anything. A healthy body is the precondition for living a meaningful life. They can work as hard as they like to achieve ambitions, go to a far-flung island to take a vacation and play some sports which are physically demanding. All these choices can give them a sense of satisfaction.
1.3 解决看病难问题
A投资医疔,B解决穷人看病难得问题,C消除社会不平等
背景:穷人没有钱买药或者和医生预约
解释(A-B )如果政府能够投入更多资助在医疗上,那么医疗保健就会便宜,减少贫困病人在医药上面的 花销,让他们买的起药
解释(B-C )穷人买的起药,可以减少贫富之间的差距
- an effective way to do sth —个有效的方法去…
- help economically disadvantaged people 帮助穷人
- deal with their medical problems 解决医疗问题
- eliminate social inquality 解除社会不平等
- buy medicines 买药
- make an appiontment 预约
- lower expenses in healthcare 医疗保健费用更少
- reduce the poor patients’ expenditure in medicines 减少贫穷病人的药物费用
- make medicines afforable to them 买得起药
- reduce the inequality between rich and poor 减少贫富不平等
Moreover, it is an effective way to help economically disadvantaged people deal with their medical problems, thereby helping to eliminate social inequality. Poor people do not have money to buy medicines or make an appiontment with a doctor. If the government can put more funds in medical care, the lower expenses in healthcare can reduce the poor patients’ expenditure in medicines and make the medicines affordable to them. Therefore, it aslo reduce the inequality between rich and poor.
2 雅思写作医疗类观点论据:投资医疗的坏处
2.1 降低医疗效率、质量
A.投资医疗,B.投资医疗会使得医疗质量减低,C.医疗设施不好
人手不足 背景:低价或者免费的医疗服务会被过度使用,当他们生病的时候,人们会更倾向去看医生 解释(A-B )政府没有钱去保证为大众提供质量统一的目晓
解释(B-C )另外免费的医疗意味着医务人员工资不高,整个行业都会无法吸引人才。医院没有足够的医生 和护士去满足病人的需求,排长队会成为常态
spend public money in medicial services 将公共资金用于医疗服务
medical services 医疗服务
low-cost or free medical services can be overused 便宜的或者免费的医疗服务会被过度使用
feel unwell 感觉不好
run out of money 不够钱
provide services of consistent quality for the public 为公众提供品质一致的服务
free medical care免费的医疗
medical personnel医务人员
well-paid 工资高
attract talent吸引人才
meet the needs of patients满足病人的需求
But spending public money in medical services has its drawback: it is difficult to maintain the quality of medical services and hospitals are understaffed. Low-cost or free medical services can be overused, and people tend to see the doctor whenever they feel unwell. The government will soon run out of money to provide services of consistent quality for the public. In addition, free medical care means that medical personnel are not well-paid and that the whole industry will fail to attract talent in the long run. Hospitals do not have sufficient doctors and nurses to meet the needs of patients, and the long waiting line will become the norm.
2.2 人们忽视健康
A投资医疔,B人们不注意生活方式,C生病增加
背景:他们觉得身体有问题,他们就会使用免费的全民医疗 解释(A-B )健康生活方式已经不在他们的考虑范围之内
举例:医疗状况比如由于过度饮食引起的肥胖,而由吸烟导致的肺癌会大大地增长 C的拓展:给医疗系统带来压力。
pay less attention to…更少关注
lifestyle-related health problems 生活习惯相关的健康问题
universal medical care 免费的全民医疗
adopt a healthy lifestyle实施健康的生活方式
medical conditions 医疗条件
obesity 肥胖
overeating 进食过量
lung cancer 肺癌
increase pressure on medical system给医疗系统增加压力
Another danger is that people will pay less attention to healthy living and lifestyle-related health problems will become pervasive. They think if they have medical problems, they can turn to universal medical care, and adopting a healthy lifestyle is no longer regarded as necessary. As a result, medical conditions for such as obesity caused by overeating and lung cancer attributed to smoking will increase dramatically, increasing more pressure on the medical system.
2.3 冲击私立医院
经济A.免费的医疔,B.对私立医院是个冲击,C.影响市场竞争
背景:国家资助的医疗保障会减少对私人医院的需要,因为它们更高标准的SS务和更复杂的仪器而收费更高
解释(A-B )—些私人医院或许会破产因为他们无法赚钱支持他们的生意 解释(C的结果)经济可能无法从医疗部门的收入获益
free medical care 免费的医疗
distort the market 扭曲市场
pose a threat to 对…带来威胁
state-subsided healthcare 国家资助的医疗保健
reduce the demand for private medical services 减少 私人医疗服务的需要
charge higher prices收费更高
higher standards of service更高标准的服务
sphisticated quipment 精密的仪器
private hospitals 私人企业
fail to earn money to support their business 无法赚钱支持他们的生意
the medical sector医疗部门
The provision of free medical care can distort the market and pose a threat to private providers of medical care. The access to state-subsidised healthcare can reduce the demand for private medical services, as they normally charge higher prices for higher standards of service and more sophisticated equipment. Some privatel hospitals may go bankrupt as they fail to earn money to support their business. The economy may not be able to benefit from the revenue of the medical sector.